HoW twE sPEll Mah NAme ;DD
One day is was in a Monday morning .I was going to school and my teacher told me if I know my name and I said no I was the only one that said I did’t know it everyone from the class was looking at me if like I had a pigs eyes .so when the kids in my class we friends were all looking at me like if I was an animal but I am not one I am a person like everyone here in this class when everyone look at me I did not know how to spell lit hello I was only what 4 years old no kid has to know how to spell their name so early. I did not mean that its because how do u know how to spell your name and I said yeah I was so happy because I new how to spell it and when I got home I told my mom guess what mommy I know how to spell my name she was happy to well that is how to spell my name thanks to my best friend Karen I love her for that<333.
14 comments:
Ivy,
This is a great memory. I wonder whether your mother had tried to teach you to write your name before the day Karen showed you how.
One thing that I noticed that you could improve is your punctuation. There are a few run-on sentences that seem to last forever and at least one missing question mark.
Good use of sensory details when you said your mom had to come get you because you were crying so loud that other students couldn't work.
Mr. McConnell
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I LIKE UR STORY IS GOOD BUT GIVE MORE DETAILS BY:BOBBY PEREZ
I LIKE U STORY BUT U ARE KIND OFF DOM U DIDNT KNOW HOW TO RIGTH UR NAME WAT A LOSER LOL BY;JAZMINE ALDANA
hey its me jose v u have a very good story and picture just make it longer
hey its me jose v u have a very good story and picture just make it longer
hEYy;;.iVy yEw lOoK gOgReOuS<33
i lUbB yEwR sTOrYy bBi GiRl
MELiSSA<$$
hEYy;;.iVy yEw lOoK gOgReOuS<33
i lUbB yEwR sTOrYy bBi GiRl
MELiSSA<$$
IT HAS LOTS OF DETAILS AND VERY INTERESTING
MAYRA TRUJILLO
IT HAS LOTS OF DETAILS AND VERY INTERESTING
MAYRA TRUJILLO
Ivy,
Cool story I can't believe u learned how to spell your name in just one day.
Beatriz Perez
I am happy that u learned how to spell your name By Leslie
ilOVE THiS stORy iVy.
ha NiCe SToRy!=D
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