Aldana, Jazmine
November 4, 2008
Period.5
Mr. McConnell
Room 63
My 6 years in elementary school
I was born in January2, 1995 I was 5years old when I started using a tricycle. In preschool I had this dark teacher I loved her so much I think is so sad that I don’t remember her name he was really nice. She was my favorite teacher. She I can’t remember her name but she will always be in my hearth. Even though I can’t remember her name I would always remember her face.
Ms. Bolado was my big sister and my cousing Victor. I remember when I told my sister I had her she was so happy after that the conference came and my sister meat Ms. Bolado’s son she jus to say that he was my boyfriend his name is Lucio. Yes, he was cute but I was not whit him ever. But yeah he like me they all told me that. Ms. Bolado always traded me nice because I was Elizabeth and Victors family.
In 1grade I got Ms. Cota. My sis and my cousing also had had her for 1&2grade. When my mom her I got Ms. Cota she was not so happy because she knew that she was to nice and that she was only going to pass me like that. I remember that in 2grade I wrote this letter to this guy name David. My friend Angela gave him the letter but when he was going 2 get it this guy got it and started to pass it around the teacher got the letter and the she got all mad. His last teacher was
Ms. Cota best friend. The teacher wanted to see me but Ms. Cota said it okay she won’t do it again so I didn’t go to the class thank god. But Ms. Cota told me that if I am ever thinking of passing a letter again to give to him face to face. She was the only one that could understand me. I love her so much I still go visit her.
When I was in 3grade I got this teacher named Mr. Ledezma I could not support him he was like the only man I got for teacher in Eastman. Guess what I got him for 4grade also. I wanted to cry I was not going to life like that I told my mom to change me and she didn’t want to so I had to stay whit that boring teacher. In 4grade I got in trouble lots of trouble .I went to the principal the first and only time I went to the principal. I went because these 3 girls were saying that we were kissing this guys and it was not true. They were this other 3 girls that also got in trouble. Angela, Kimberly, Mariela, and me. Well they were all crying I was not but I was the only one that got in trouble.
In 5grade I got this teacher named Ms. Flores. Well my big brother had this teacher she was also one of my favorite teacher .She is the teacher that told me that ….. Was not a real friend and you now how we are we never listing to are adults well she was saying the true. Now I am in 8grade and back in 6grade she went up to me saying that I was talking smack about her that she was whit this boy I liked way would I say that if I liked him that’s so stupid but what ever. In 7grade I was going to get down because my best friend was talking things to her in my Myspace and then went up to me like 5 girls but then I had back up so the didn’t do nada. In nutrition this other 10 girls went up to me and I was going 2 get down right there but I didn’t. I told my friend that they were going to go up to her tomorrow and the mom heard so she called r teacher because the moms brother is married whit the sister of the wife of are teacher so he said to go tomorrow in the morning to his class. Then he sent us to the dean and they call all of us and so we didn’t get down. I still talk to my friend I got ….. For one of my classes. I don’t talk to her but I don’t hate.
November 4, 2008
Period.5
Mr. McConnell
Room 63
My 6 years in elementary school
I was born in January2, 1995 I was 5years old when I started using a tricycle. In preschool I had this dark teacher I loved her so much I think is so sad that I don’t remember her name he was really nice. She was my favorite teacher. She I can’t remember her name but she will always be in my hearth. Even though I can’t remember her name I would always remember her face.
Ms. Bolado was my big sister and my cousing Victor. I remember when I told my sister I had her she was so happy after that the conference came and my sister meat Ms. Bolado’s son she jus to say that he was my boyfriend his name is Lucio. Yes, he was cute but I was not whit him ever. But yeah he like me they all told me that. Ms. Bolado always traded me nice because I was Elizabeth and Victors family.
In 1grade I got Ms. Cota. My sis and my cousing also had had her for 1&2grade. When my mom her I got Ms. Cota she was not so happy because she knew that she was to nice and that she was only going to pass me like that. I remember that in 2grade I wrote this letter to this guy name David. My friend Angela gave him the letter but when he was going 2 get it this guy got it and started to pass it around the teacher got the letter and the she got all mad. His last teacher was
Ms. Cota best friend. The teacher wanted to see me but Ms. Cota said it okay she won’t do it again so I didn’t go to the class thank god. But Ms. Cota told me that if I am ever thinking of passing a letter again to give to him face to face. She was the only one that could understand me. I love her so much I still go visit her.
When I was in 3grade I got this teacher named Mr. Ledezma I could not support him he was like the only man I got for teacher in Eastman. Guess what I got him for 4grade also. I wanted to cry I was not going to life like that I told my mom to change me and she didn’t want to so I had to stay whit that boring teacher. In 4grade I got in trouble lots of trouble .I went to the principal the first and only time I went to the principal. I went because these 3 girls were saying that we were kissing this guys and it was not true. They were this other 3 girls that also got in trouble. Angela, Kimberly, Mariela, and me. Well they were all crying I was not but I was the only one that got in trouble.
In 5grade I got this teacher named Ms. Flores. Well my big brother had this teacher she was also one of my favorite teacher .She is the teacher that told me that ….. Was not a real friend and you now how we are we never listing to are adults well she was saying the true. Now I am in 8grade and back in 6grade she went up to me saying that I was talking smack about her that she was whit this boy I liked way would I say that if I liked him that’s so stupid but what ever. In 7grade I was going to get down because my best friend was talking things to her in my Myspace and then went up to me like 5 girls but then I had back up so the didn’t do nada. In nutrition this other 10 girls went up to me and I was going 2 get down right there but I didn’t. I told my friend that they were going to go up to her tomorrow and the mom heard so she called r teacher because the moms brother is married whit the sister of the wife of are teacher so he said to go tomorrow in the morning to his class. Then he sent us to the dean and they call all of us and so we didn’t get down. I still talk to my friend I got ….. For one of my classes. I don’t talk to her but I don’t hate.
5 comments:
Jazmine,
This memoir should focus on one specific memory from your school experience. I think you should revise it to only tell about the time when you were busted passing the letter in second grade. Include your thoughts and feelings and use sensory details when you tell about the lesson that Ms. Cota tried to teach you after that incident.
Also, be sure to read your story out loud and make sure it sounds correct and "makes sense" before you re-publish it.
Mr. McConnell
Jazmin u have a great story and i think i would want a teacher that nice BY:BOBBY PEREZ
INTERESTING STORY
MAYRA TRUJILLO
I like your story jazmine it is is good u got nice teachers By Leslie
like da story love ur pics
brianda lopez
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