The worst day of my life was when I was in 6th grade. I was in Mr. Miranda's class, it was 6th period. It was so humiliating because all the people were just looking at me, even the guys were looking at me & they were just laughing. So i just got really panic & i told Mr. Miranda that i had to got to the restroom because it was an emergency and that i had to go really badly. He didn't let me go at first but then, I just told him & very loudly MR. I NEED TO GO TO THE RESTROOM BECAUSE I JUST GOT MY PERIOD.'' So he's all like then go, go. So i wanted to stand up but all the people in my class were looking at me & i just felt like crying because all my pants were staine & you could of really see it. So i just stand up & i went with my friend jenny because i didn't wanted to go alone. Then i asked George to lend me his sweater because i was staine he was so nice that he did lend it to me. after that i went to the nurse to get a pad & to call my dad for he could bring me some clothes. so then he did, then i had to go back to my 6th period. When i went in their everybody was just looking at me, like if they have a staring problem. So i screamed DAYAM WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT YOU B******. Then my teacher Mr. Miranda told me to sit down. Finally the day ended and people were asking me alot of questions outside of class i was just ignoring them. Then some days passed & people forgot about it. But that was the most humiliating day of my 6th grade.
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Wow Joscelyn that is a really personal story, but most girls have go through something like that.
You used some good details, but you could have included more about how you felt. Also, you need to check on the personal pronoun "I", it must be capitalized.
One more correction you could make is don't use &...use "and".
Mr. McConnell
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