Some of my friends I still talk to but some I hardly don’t talk or don’t see at often. Some of my friends came from different schools. Some of my new friends came from different schools. I came from the school Eastman elementary. Some of then came from schools that were Sunrise, Rowan, Lorena, and some other schools.
Some of my friends came from sunrise her name is Laura Chavez. Laura is a little tall has black hair with yellow hairlines she has brown eyes. I got to met her in Mr. Rivera class I also had her for all of my classes we used to sit together for 1, 2, and 6 period. We will always be having fun when we had free time or when we just bored.
Laura and I used to hanged out in lunch and nutrition both some of our friends. We used to hang some times with her friends or my friends. Some of her friends names are Paola A., Tania L., Fannie R., Emily A., Carla O. and some other girls. Some of my friends that she got to know were Angie C., Vicky A., Brenda B., Jessica A. and some more girls. We had some girls that non of us didn’t know and we probably had them for one or more periods. Like Maria, Lily, Sierna, and some other girls. After we got to know them we will be all hanging out and all having fun all of the times when we could of have fun.
In the seventh grade I got to met lots of girls like Mayra Trujillo. Mayra came from Eastman elementary she is kind of tall has brown hair and brown eyes. I got to know Mayra in our math class in Mr. Chia class we had that class for second period. We had most of our classes together excited for first period we both had physical education just with different teachers. In that math class I got to some iterating people that have different elective and some people that I think have iterating elective are Evenly R. Angel A. Uriel G. Bryan H. Nancy G. Brenda S. and lots more people. Some of them I have for some of my classes and we do have l
ome iterating people that have different elective and some people that I think have iterating elective are Evenly R. Angel A. Uriel G. Bryan H. Nancy G. Brenda S. and lots more people. Some of them I have for some of my classes and we do have l
lots of people like Elidee P. Michelle B. Jocelyn M. Yurithza E. and some other friends. We will always be working together because we know that we will finish fast and we will just start to talk about something interesting.
Now that I am in eighth grade I have met some iterating elective are Evenly R. Angel A. Uriel G. Bryan H. Nancy G. Brenda S. and lots more people. Some of them I have for some of my classes and we do have lots of fun talking and doing some experiments in the classes. I do have fun with them. There are all different and that is what we could talk about and things that some of us don’t know and we always have fun together talking and just playing around with them and we are always cool with each other. I do think we will be always be cool with each other and I will remember this school year.
Friday, December 12, 2008
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3 comments:
correct spelling and its really interesting
mayra trujillo
Briana,
It is great that you have had the opportunity to meet so many good friends in middle school. I'm sure you will carry on many of the relationships to high school too.
You have a few places where you could correct the subject-verb agreement in your story. Remember that when you talk about the past, you need to use the past tense form of the verb.
Overall I liked reading your story, but wished you had talked more about one specific incident, like maybe when you met Mayra.
Check Mayra's comment for the correct spelling of interesting.
I met almost all of my friends the same way and i had a really annoying friend named Angel he would call me poodle great story.
Noemi Franco
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