
My best day in Stevenson Middle School was when I first became a 8th grader. I thought I was going to be all that. But then I had decided that I don’t want to be a little showoff. So I began how I’m really am. I got o know new people. New girls. I became friends with them, and I started talking to them. After that two weeks later I saw this beautiful girl. So I went and introduced myself, to her. She told me her name was Monique. So we sat down, then started walking around and she gave her number. I started calling her everyday at 8:00 in the night. We got to know each other more. I’ll walk her to class then I found out she had a boyfriend. So I felt kind a of sad. One day later I told her that I was in love with her. She didn’t believe me at first. So I went ahead and proved it to her. Then she believed me. Then one day I was going to get in a fight with him because he saw us having fun and he had got jealous. Then I was walking her and he hit me in the back of the head. I was going to hit him back but Monique got in front of us and I couldn’t hit him back. At lunch I was going to get him back but he got scared and left because he didn’t wan to fight. Then they broken up, and ne week later me and Monique got together. We have a fun time together and we’ve been together for one month, three weeks, and two days. And now we are still having fun together
17 comments:
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Diana Barco
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Diana Barco
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Yurithza EspArza
I LIKE HOW U USED UR GOOD DETAILS GREAT JOB BY: BOBBY PEREZ
you need to corect your story by joseph ochoa
LUIS YOU ARE ONE COOL PLAYA
BY DANIEL SANCHEZ
WHY DID YOU CALL HER A HE ON YOUR STORYBY JOSEPH OCHOA
LUIS HEY MAN LOOK AT YOUR SPELLING MAN >=D BY LESTER MEZA
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Nice details, you have some grammar errors but either I loved your story. Monique totally loves you too.
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