
In my first day of pre-school it was very fun but also really scary because I had never been with out my mom so I cried. I was 4 years old, every time I was left there I cry like a water hose. Then I got used to staying there and I had a lot of friends I loved playing with the hammers and making a lot of noise. After there was this girl she was a pain in the butt she didn’t leave me alone not even at naptime. Then she became my girl friend. Then she left me the second day she was bothering other boys and I was really relief. Then I past to kinder it was kind of hard for me I stared to say the alphabet and the numbers they where hard to memories but the cool part of that class was we used to learn the letters pictured in a dolls stomach .They were fun and we learned ,in my alphabet test’s I used to get 90% or higher and I always got a big smiley face .When I got my first video game I had gotten was very special because I had gotten my first grade and it was one of my highest grades I had gotten in that grade level, so my mom and father said that they were going to buy me the new video game for my good grade I was so happy ,when I started to play with my new video game I had no idea of how to use it then I ask my brother how was a geek at playing games .then I was a pro at playing ,after I got really into playing does games that my grades went down because the games were more better then doing my homework but when they took my video game away so I had to get my grade up .I got my grade up and got my game but with one condition that I wont lower my grades then a C .In my first grade class everything was easy ,I do not remember that much but I do remember that I had a really cool girl friend and she did not separate from me so I started to hid from her so at that time I had moved to a new school and the bad thing about it was that we moved three blocks from her house then I never saw her again because I had moved school .In my second grade I had a really cool teacher she did not leave use homework in class I always got an A because she only left use project like build a model of a house or a car .After I past the second grade my dad took us to Mexico and left us over their with our mom how was visiting her mom .Then I went to school in Mexico for 2-4 it was really hard because I only talk English more than Spanish .then we came back to the U.S and I started in fifth grade, I had this teacher named Miss sweat she was mean and I came here with out knowing how to write or read English I could only speak ,then I took a special classes and I got better but I still stud in fifth grade again because I decided to stay because I was not ready .Then I past to six grade and started in a very low level called ESL then in seventh grade I got changed to a regular English class . In eighth grade I pass a very good time because I feel good for me and how far I gotten in my few years in school .SO THAT’S MY EARLY CHILDHOOD I NOW IT IS BORING BUT WHAT COULD YOU DO.
1 comment:
Luis,
I think you should have written more about your experience going to school in Mexico. Also use sensory details to make the reader connect to what you went through.
Mr. McConnell
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